Leonard is twenty; I am older than he.
I've got plenty of rp experience (here and elsewhere)!
Leonard Uaine
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Leonard Uaine
- Posts: 69
- Joined: Mon Dec 21, 2020 12:06 pm
- Age: 20
- Gender Identity: Male
- Race: Faunus (Snapping Turtle mouth)
- Aura Color: Viridian
- Occupation: Frosh
- Semblance Name: Intransient Steps
- Weapon Name: Fisticufflets
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Bastion Sandstone
- Posts: 114
- Joined: Sat Dec 12, 2020 11:45 pm
- Age: 19
- Gender Identity: Male
- Race: Human
- Aura Color: Sandy-tan
- Occupation:
- Semblance Name: True Grit
- Weapon Name: Diplomacy
Some pretty rad potential, though with so much pending I can't say yay or nay. Look foward to what this guy will become.
Bastion tries to keep the peace in FFBF00
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Al Ciendra
- Posts: 430
- Joined: Tue Feb 02, 2021 5:13 am
- Age: 18
- Gender Identity: Female
- Race: Faunus (Wolf-Ears and Fangs)
- Aura Color: Orange
- Occupation: Beacon Student
- Semblance Name: Volcanic Heart
- Weapon Name: Arcum and Gladio
I'm with Bastion on this, I like the concept you have laid out, but this BIO is lacking in a lot of detail, and it's hard to get a good picture of this character.
So I'm holding my vote until he gets developed a bit further.
No need to add a semblance either, I do like the surprise factor of having it manifest mid-roleplay.
So I'm holding my vote until he gets developed a bit further.
No need to add a semblance either, I do like the surprise factor of having it manifest mid-roleplay.
Al chatters in #FF5500
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Ax L Rose
- Posts: 282
- Joined: Sat Feb 06, 2021 2:27 pm
- Age: 23
- Gender Identity: Female
- Race: Faunus - Major Mitchell's Cockatoo - Feathers
- Aura Color: Electric Blue
- Occupation: Huntress
- Semblance Name: Harmonize
- Weapon Name: Electra Heart + Rebel Yell
I like this concept. I vote yes. Honestly I like that his profile is pretty lightweight so far. It's pretty easy to read and I feel like you get a pretty decent idea of what the character is like even though not every detail is explicitly spelled out.
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SheidelII
- Posts: 54
- Joined: Sat Dec 12, 2020 10:47 pm
- Age: 0
- Gender Identity: Male
- Occupation:
There's a good feel for the kind of character you're going for so far. You've given yourself a good base to use. Looking forward to the completed profile!
For a Semblance name, maybe "White Knuckle"? Being a boxer, Leonard Uaine is very fist-oriented, and white knuckle is a term to describe tensing your hands into fists. Its kind of like making something solid and rigid, like what you have for his Semblance description.
For a Semblance name, maybe "White Knuckle"? Being a boxer, Leonard Uaine is very fist-oriented, and white knuckle is a term to describe tensing your hands into fists. Its kind of like making something solid and rigid, like what you have for his Semblance description.
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Al Ciendra
- Posts: 430
- Joined: Tue Feb 02, 2021 5:13 am
- Age: 18
- Gender Identity: Female
- Race: Faunus (Wolf-Ears and Fangs)
- Aura Color: Orange
- Occupation: Beacon Student
- Semblance Name: Volcanic Heart
- Weapon Name: Arcum and Gladio
Well after the changes and additions Lennie gets a yes from me.
Al chatters in #FF5500
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Myron Hyles
- Posts: 81
- Joined: Sun Dec 13, 2020 4:58 am
- Age: 18
- Gender Identity: Male
- Race: Human
- Aura Color: Turquoise
- Occupation: Student
- Semblance Name: Sleeping Spell
- Weapon Name: 40 Winks
I like this character as a whole. I'm partial to longer profiles like always, but you have a hand with shorter ones (idk if this is complete yet).
The fact that he's a hotheaded (giant) turtle faunus is hilarious.
You may want to correct his Aura color, since it appears on every post (you meant viridian, right?).
Anyway, that's a Yes.
The fact that he's a hotheaded (giant) turtle faunus is hilarious.
You may want to correct his Aura color, since it appears on every post (you meant viridian, right?).
Anyway, that's a Yes.
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Leonard Uaine
- Posts: 69
- Joined: Mon Dec 21, 2020 12:06 pm
- Age: 20
- Gender Identity: Male
- Race: Faunus (Snapping Turtle mouth)
- Aura Color: Viridian
- Occupation: Frosh
- Semblance Name: Intransient Steps
- Weapon Name: Fisticufflets
Veridian/Viridian is actually another one of those grey/gray things, but I'll switch to the more common spelling. :3
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Myron Hyles
- Posts: 81
- Joined: Sun Dec 13, 2020 4:58 am
- Age: 18
- Gender Identity: Male
- Race: Human
- Aura Color: Turquoise
- Occupation: Student
- Semblance Name: Sleeping Spell
- Weapon Name: 40 Winks
No, my mistake, I just couldn't find the color online.