APPROVAL REQUEST POLL - Emerile Oddman
- Emerile Oddman
- Posts: 3
- Joined: Fri May 24, 2024 1:09 am
- Age: 17
- Gender Identity: Female
- Race: Human
- Aura Color: Emerald Green
- Occupation: Beacon Academy Student
- Semblance Name: Q - Authority
- Weapon Name: Creo Link
This is a approval request poll for Emerile Oddman: memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=3764
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- Posts: 261
- Joined: Tue Dec 22, 2020 5:00 pm
- Age: 19
- Gender Identity: Female
- Race: Faunus (White Tiger, stripes and pale skin)
- Aura Color: Viridian-Green
- Occupation: 1st Year Student, Tattooing-Assistant
- Semblance Name: Kinetic Discharge
- Weapon Name: Viridian Naraka and Carnassial Talon
Looks good.
And I mean literally. I love the way the profile is written, from it's eloquent descriptions to the little headers within the sections.
Now, the profile is quite long (even for my standarts) which, in my opinion, isn't necessarily a bad thing. But it makes it seem like some of it's contents should be reserved for an extended profile or the post signature once the character is approved. For example the Themes within the Fun Facts Section could easily be put in the signature. Just a minor nitpick.
Considering the things that were discussed in the discord... the semblance only affects objects. But it makes me wonder how it interacts with the equipment of other aura users. I don't suppose it bypasses the aura protection? Some exposition on that interaction and it's incapability to affect living things would have been appreciated.
That said, all in all I'll give it a yes, since most of these things can quickly be worked over pre-or post-approval. Unless of course someone else believes my previous point requires some further discussion, that is.
And I mean literally. I love the way the profile is written, from it's eloquent descriptions to the little headers within the sections.
Now, the profile is quite long (even for my standarts) which, in my opinion, isn't necessarily a bad thing. But it makes it seem like some of it's contents should be reserved for an extended profile or the post signature once the character is approved. For example the Themes within the Fun Facts Section could easily be put in the signature. Just a minor nitpick.
Considering the things that were discussed in the discord... the semblance only affects objects. But it makes me wonder how it interacts with the equipment of other aura users. I don't suppose it bypasses the aura protection? Some exposition on that interaction and it's incapability to affect living things would have been appreciated.
That said, all in all I'll give it a yes, since most of these things can quickly be worked over pre-or post-approval. Unless of course someone else believes my previous point requires some further discussion, that is.
- Forrest Waldstein
- Posts: 250
- Joined: Wed Apr 12, 2023 6:51 pm
- Age: 18
- Gender Identity: Male
- Race: Human
- Aura Color: Green
- Occupation: Student
- Semblance Name: Sylvan Anthem
- Weapon Name: Grashalm
I must say, this profile is a banger. Very well constructed and very fleshed out. Emerile seems like she'd be an excellent addition to the site. Emerile deserves a yes from me.
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The sylvan theater hears Forrest in #00FF00 or #008000
Forrest's EP
The inspirational lo-fi I like to listen to while I write Forrest can be found here
- Professor W B Copperfield
- Posts: 219
- Joined: Fri Jan 08, 2021 9:58 am
- Age: 42
- Gender Identity: Male
- Race: Human
- Aura Color: Transparent light blue
- Occupation: Professor of Dust and Semblance Usage, Beacon
- Semblance Name: Forzare
- Weapon Name: Foci and Rod
Though the profile isnlong, its broken up into sections with headers that make it far easier to read, to understand what I'm reading, and keep reading fatigue away. Very thorough! Love it! Even with the themes, I like. Yes!
- Professor Wednesday Haptasnytrir
- Posts: 79
- Joined: Fri Jul 23, 2021 11:04 pm
- Age: 39
- Gender Identity: Female*
- Race: Human
- Aura Color: Grey
- Occupation: Professor, Huntress
- Semblance Name: Hliðskjálf
- Weapon Name: Gungnir and Valföðr
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