Saoirse Luíseach

A collection of the previously approved/denied character's applications complete with feedback posts for future reference.
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Total votes: 3
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Saoirse Luíseach
Posts: 28
Joined: Thu Sep 21, 2023 11:15 pm
Age: 17
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Human
Aura Color: White
Occupation: Student
Semblance Name: Chainbreaker
Weapon Name: Grimoire Draíocht

"First rule of Damsel school: no one's fucking coming."

Here lies the Approval thread for she who rescued herself.
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Professor W B Copperfield
Posts: 219
Joined: Fri Jan 08, 2021 9:58 am
Age: 42
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Transparent light blue
Occupation: Professor of Dust and Semblance Usage, Beacon
Semblance Name: Forzare
Weapon Name: Foci and Rod

Looks great! Adding in some ancient lore tidbits to the world, I like. Copperfield is gonna go insane trying to study that book and how it works I bet, if she lets him get close. You know my reservations about the book and how it operates, but as long as the effects are clearly made with Dust, even sophisticatedly, and very elemental based, I'm ok with it. Yes.
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Saoirse Luíseach
Posts: 28
Joined: Thu Sep 21, 2023 11:15 pm
Age: 17
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Human
Aura Color: White
Occupation: Student
Semblance Name: Chainbreaker
Weapon Name: Grimoire Draíocht

I'm having way too much fun building the 'language' used by the Grimoire Draíocht (literally 'magic book' lmao)

It's going to take some careful and deliberate narration to make some of the more... magic-y spells feel more like Dust usage than full-on magic, but that just makes writing her more fun. It's definitely going to take a bit of dialing in, but maybe now I have an excuse to use #mini-rp?
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Al Ciendra
Posts: 432
Joined: Tue Feb 02, 2021 5:13 am
Age: 18
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Faunus (Wolf-Ears and Fangs)
Aura Color: Orange
Occupation: Beacon Student
Semblance Name: Volcanic Heart
Weapon Name: Arcum and Gladio

All around a really interesting character, bit confused on her age, considering all the time shenanigans being stuck as a painting may have done to her, but it's what ever.
Her semblance, is real nice and straight forward, for once, love the idea of a "freedom on demand" semblance.
And then the weapon is really cool! Along with her design, she fills the "magician lady" vibe really well and I love it.

So yeah, 'tis a yes.
Al chatters in #FF5500
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Professor Honeydew Monarch
Posts: 46
Joined: Sun Aug 11, 2019 4:14 am
Age: 32
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Human
Aura Color: Seafoam Green
Occupation: Professor of History and Tactics, Beacon Academy
Semblance Name: Omnipresence
Weapon Name: The Kingkiller

Character has been approved, ta daaaa! Happy Hunting. And Halloween, I guess.
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And this is how it moves / Faster and faster now it goes
It might stop when we're finally dead

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