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Claire's an Antagonist character, though she is decidedly not villainous.
Claire Buíocán
- Claire Buíocán
- Posts: 27
- Joined: Fri Sep 23, 2022 6:50 am
- Age: 35
- Gender Identity: Female
- Race: Human
- Aura Color: translucent - see Semblance
- Occupation: Vigilante
- Semblance Name: Mythmaker
- Weapon Name: Síofra
- Professor W B Copperfield
- Posts: 219
- Joined: Fri Jan 08, 2021 9:58 am
- Age: 42
- Gender Identity: Male
- Race: Human
- Aura Color: Transparent light blue
- Occupation: Professor of Dust and Semblance Usage, Beacon
- Semblance Name: Forzare
- Weapon Name: Foci and Rod
A powerful and tricky Semblance for an Antagonist, and I also like how you added(from the last time I looked) Aura costs for the basic uses, like a greater cost for the larger the physical exertion. This allows her to do some fairly great things, but always with some limit down the road.
Also looks like she fills the Antagonist criteria to me by all aspects.
Yes.
Also looks like she fills the Antagonist criteria to me by all aspects.
Yes.
- Forrest Waldstein
- Posts: 250
- Joined: Wed Apr 12, 2023 6:51 pm
- Age: 18
- Gender Identity: Male
- Race: Human
- Aura Color: Green
- Occupation: Student
- Semblance Name: Sylvan Anthem
- Weapon Name: Grashalm
Claire is an incredibly fascinating character. She has a really interesting Semblance that is fueled by the minds of other people for better or worse. I cannot wait to see what she'll get up to.
So, it's no surprise that I can only give Claire an emphatic, resounding yes.
So, it's no surprise that I can only give Claire an emphatic, resounding yes.
Nature remembers all. Always make sure you give something back to the world when you take from it.
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The inspirational lo-fi I like to listen to while I write Forrest can be found here
- Al Ciendra
- Posts: 432
- Joined: Tue Feb 02, 2021 5:13 am
- Age: 18
- Gender Identity: Female
- Race: Faunus (Wolf-Ears and Fangs)
- Aura Color: Orange
- Occupation: Beacon Student
- Semblance Name: Volcanic Heart
- Weapon Name: Arcum and Gladio
Claire is a great character, a matron to the lost and someone working to establish equality for all is surely someone to be admired.
I don't really get whats antagonistic about her?
I guess she pulls some shady underground deals?
No idea.
Regardless, it's fine as is, just s bit confused.
On the topic of her semblance, I really likethe idea, the power to turn your opponents worries into reality is great and opens up some fun rp.
And while it makes perfect sense for her to draw on her semblance to give her some passive buffs by spreading rumors.
I think her semblance should be toned down, especially the bit about her temporarily disabling someones semblance, it's cool to have a swiss army knife, but you brought a swiss army armory.
Perhaps limit her to being able to draw on a few effects at once, give them a timelimit after which they need to be refreshed or increase the amount of aura this powerful of semblance would cost.
Right now I'm going to abstain from voting because of this.
I don't really get whats antagonistic about her?
I guess she pulls some shady underground deals?
No idea.
Regardless, it's fine as is, just s bit confused.
On the topic of her semblance, I really likethe idea, the power to turn your opponents worries into reality is great and opens up some fun rp.
And while it makes perfect sense for her to draw on her semblance to give her some passive buffs by spreading rumors.
I think her semblance should be toned down, especially the bit about her temporarily disabling someones semblance, it's cool to have a swiss army knife, but you brought a swiss army armory.
Perhaps limit her to being able to draw on a few effects at once, give them a timelimit after which they need to be refreshed or increase the amount of aura this powerful of semblance would cost.
Right now I'm going to abstain from voting because of this.
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- Professor Honeydew Monarch
- Posts: 46
- Joined: Sun Aug 11, 2019 4:14 am
- Age: 32
- Gender Identity: Female
- Race: Human
- Aura Color: Seafoam Green
- Occupation: Professor of History and Tactics, Beacon Academy
- Semblance Name: Omnipresence
- Weapon Name: The Kingkiller