Professor Honeydew Monarch

[Professor Honeydew Monarch]

1. Are you 18 or older? We want to know if anyone is under 18 years of age. Being under 18 will not bar you from participating in our community. Rather, this will allow us to gauge who is acting inappropriately toward minors.

Yes

2. Do you have past experience with collaborative writing or roleplay, and if so, roughly how much? You can be brief. This is intended to help us provide useful feedback in your approval.

Oh yeah, bunches yo

3. You may include an optional (SHORT!) Roleplay sample for people to read that gives a feel for your character in writing.

You'll just have to wait and see ;>

...I'm lazy D:

[Bartok Evergreen]

With great displeasure as to how RWBY disregards how blades and armor and things work(just like most video media made for entertainment), and after the discussion in Discord about said subject, I vote Yes.

However, dear Admin, this needs to be made into a poll first.

Merry Christmas.

[Colors of Remnant]

I changed this thread to a poll, so ya'll are aware.

[Myron Hyles]

So we got a professor with a 720° line of sight. With a mace. That's terrifying...
I like everything (except the Fire Emblem "nothing to report" PTSD), so Yes.

Good job describing her fighting style, and the fact that she's reached a ceiling with some of her skills.

[Professor Honeydew Monarch]

Just to state this in a more direct sense: Honeydew does not suffer from PTSD. She simply has memories of trauma, same as any war veteran might. Also I plan to rewrite her weapon description to be more concise in the future, as I initially wrote it at 3 AM and don't feel it's very adequate in correctly describing the Kingkiller's purpose and function. The weapon itself is designed specifically as an anti-armor weapon utilized against hardened targets and, more or less, things that are bigger than Honeydew herself (hence the name Kingkiller)

For everything else, there's bullets. Or grenades. Or punching. You get the idea.

I'll rewrite it sooner or later

[Citrine Locke]

Looks good to me! I can't wait for her to school the hell out of Citrine XD
Only thing of note, the Kingkiller has four transformations, and I think the standardly accepted maximum is three, since that's the most we've seen in the show.

[Kailyn Keison]

Let's get the Professor approved so there's an authority figure to handle all the shenanigans all the new students will get up to! Take my 'yes' vote.

[Bartok Evergreen]

Just realized that I accidentaly voted for you with both of my characters. Oopsie. There isn't a way to take away a vote, so I'm changing one of them to 'No' for the sake of clarity and to clear up any confusion.

[Professor Honeydew Monarch]

Noted, and here I was expecting to have some big criticism to answer lol. For the purposes of approval I'll count her votes at 4 out of 5 then.

[SheidelII]

'Yes' from me. You've got a good handle on pretty much all aspects of this character.