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Leonard Uaine
Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2021 6:26 am
by Leonard Uaine
Leonard is twenty; I am older than he.
I've got plenty of rp experience (here and elsewhere)!
Re: Leonard Uaine
Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2021 3:18 pm
by Bastion Sandstone
Some pretty rad potential, though with so much pending I can't say yay or nay. Look foward to what this guy will become.
Re: Leonard Uaine
Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2021 8:01 pm
by Al Ciendra
I'm with Bastion on this, I like the concept you have laid out, but this BIO is lacking in a lot of detail, and it's hard to get a good picture of this character.
So I'm holding my vote until he gets developed a bit further.
No need to add a semblance either, I do like the surprise factor of having it manifest mid-roleplay.
Re: Leonard Uaine
Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2021 8:25 am
by Ax L Rose
I like this concept. I vote yes. Honestly I like that his profile is pretty lightweight so far. It's pretty easy to read and I feel like you get a pretty decent idea of what the character is like even though not every detail is explicitly spelled out.
Re: Leonard Uaine
Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2021 12:40 am
by SheidelII
There's a good feel for the kind of character you're going for so far. You've given yourself a good base to use. Looking forward to the completed profile!
For a Semblance name, maybe "White Knuckle"? Being a boxer, Leonard Uaine is very fist-oriented, and white knuckle is a term to describe tensing your hands into fists. Its kind of like making something solid and rigid, like what you have for his Semblance description.
Re: Leonard Uaine
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2021 9:49 pm
by Al Ciendra
Well after the changes and additions Lennie gets a yes from me.
Re: Leonard Uaine
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2021 10:00 pm
by Myron Hyles
I like this character as a whole. I'm partial to longer profiles like always, but you have a hand with shorter ones (idk if this is complete yet).
The fact that he's a hotheaded (giant) turtle faunus is hilarious.
You may want to correct his Aura color, since it appears on every post (you meant viridian, right?).
Anyway, that's a Yes.
Re: Leonard Uaine
Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2021 6:03 am
by Leonard Uaine
Veridian/Viridian is actually another one of those grey/gray things, but I'll switch to the more common spelling. :3
Re: Leonard Uaine
Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2021 7:03 am
by Myron Hyles
No, my mistake, I just couldn't find the color online.