John Fire Heart, The Blackmsith and Hunter Approval poll

A collection of the previously approved/denied character's applications complete with feedback posts for future reference.
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Crimson Heart
Posts: 1
Joined: Sun Sep 15, 2024 1:21 am
Age: 27
Gender Identity: He/Him
Race: Faunus, Bear traits. Increased muscle, claws
Aura Color: Crimson
Occupation: Hunter/Black smith
Semblance Name: Tectonic Shift
Weapon Name: Earthshaker

I am Crimson Heart. Pleasure to make your aquantence. Though I am new here, I do hope to make some interesting stories here.

1. Are you 18 or older? Yes, I am 26.

2. Do you have past experience with collaborative writing or roleplay, and if so, roughly how much?

I have been playing DND since i was 17. I usually DM, but often enjoy being a player aswell. I have also been a few RP servers on games like PZ, MC, and Pax Dei.

3. Optional Roleplay sample:

The sounds of a drill followed by the clangs of red hot steel can be heard echoeing from Johns blacksmith station. A fellow hunter stands patiently watching over his work as he hammers away at the weapon. As he swings down his hammer for the last time, he checks the edge before placing it into the oil to cool. He looks back towards the other hunter standing in the doorway. So, pray tell. How did you manage to bend your blade at a 30 degree angle? Ah.. nevermind. I shouldnt pester into your work.. though please take better care of your weapon. It is your partner. Rather see it shine then bashed to hell..

As he removes the weapons blade from the oil, he carfeully reattaches it into the mechanisim of the main weapon before placing the security bolt back into place. John wipes his forehead of sweat before wiping his hands on a cloth and starts to grind the edge of the blade to make sure it retains its edge even after a swipe at a armored Grimm. Cant have it becomming dull in the middle of a fight..
He polishes the blade after checking the edge and hands the weapon back along with a small assortment of material for field maintenance. Before letting go of the weapon he looks at the hunter sternly You better take care of this.. We dont need anymore casualties due to neglagence He releases the weapon as the hunter hands him a card with the payment on it before setting off. John lets out a deep sigh before cleaning up his work station is preperation for the next person to pay him a visit..
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Professor W B Copperfield
Posts: 219
Joined: Fri Jan 08, 2021 9:58 am
Age: 42
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Transparent light blue
Occupation: Professor of Dust and Semblance Usage, Beacon
Semblance Name: Forzare
Weapon Name: Foci and Rod

So sorry this has taken near a month for someone to get to. I think it turned into one of those "someone else will review it" sort of things.

I like him! And he's *very* well thought out and written, he'd make an excellent addition and I love the Hunter characters that are past their schooling anyway. Yes from me.
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Professor Fiona L Caligo
Posts: 15
Joined: Sat Feb 17, 2024 2:36 pm
Age: 30
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Owl Faunus
Aura Color: White
Occupation: Professor of Security and Combat Medicine
Semblance Name: Lux and Void
Weapon Name: Circadian

This character has finally been approved, the post will be locked moved to the archive, a belated welcome to colors.
Fiona rambles in #BEB6A3
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