Carmine Valentina
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Carmine Valentina
- Posts: 16
- Joined: Wed May 15, 2024 8:54 pm
- Age: 24
- Gender Identity: Female
- Race: Human
- Aura Color: Blood-Red
- Occupation: Second-in-command of the Cleaner
- Semblance Name: Minezone
- Weapon Name: Reconcile
Does this character meet the requirements for approval?
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Nero Zine
- Posts: 58
- Joined: Fri Nov 03, 2023 11:00 pm
- Age: 20
- Gender Identity: Female
- Race: Faunus Snake
- Aura Color: Dark Blue
- Occupation:
- Semblance Name: Affinity Change
- Weapon Name: Caduceus
Although the weapon in itself is a bit redundant with the two forms, I like the character as a sort of mix between Tyrian and Roman, the semblance is cool, and I like the idea of a mafia
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Forrest Waldstein
- Posts: 250
- Joined: Wed Apr 12, 2023 6:51 pm
- Age: 18
- Gender Identity: Male
- Race: Human
- Aura Color: Green
- Occupation: Student
- Semblance Name: Sylvan Anthem
- Weapon Name: Grashalm
Carmine is certainly an interesting character. We love a good criminal in this house. As for her Semblance, I like it, although it does look a bit familiar...
Nonetheless, Carmine gets my vote of approval!
Nonetheless, Carmine gets my vote of approval!
Nature remembers all. Always make sure you give something back to the world when you take from it.
The sylvan theater hears Forrest in #00FF00 or #008000
Forrest's EP
The inspirational lo-fi I like to listen to while I write Forrest can be found here
The sylvan theater hears Forrest in #00FF00 or #008000
Forrest's EP
The inspirational lo-fi I like to listen to while I write Forrest can be found here
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Professor Fiona L Caligo
- Posts: 16
- Joined: Sat Feb 17, 2024 2:36 pm
- Age: 30
- Gender Identity: Female
- Race: Owl Faunus
- Aura Color: White
- Occupation: Professor of Security and Combat Medicine
- Semblance Name: Lux and Void
- Weapon Name: Circadian
Both weapon and Semblance are a bit bland as pointed out by others, but nothing is inherently wrong with the profile.
I'd ask you to maybe think of a more interesting alternate mode for her weapon rather than it just becoming a bigger club, there are plenty of options.
For now, I will withhold my vote.
I'd ask you to maybe think of a more interesting alternate mode for her weapon rather than it just becoming a bigger club, there are plenty of options.
For now, I will withhold my vote.
Fiona rambles in #BEB6A3
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Carmine Valentina
- Posts: 16
- Joined: Wed May 15, 2024 8:54 pm
- Age: 24
- Gender Identity: Female
- Race: Human
- Aura Color: Blood-Red
- Occupation: Second-in-command of the Cleaner
- Semblance Name: Minezone
- Weapon Name: Reconcile
ok, that is done and doone and i tried so sorry if it's a bit bland to your liking.
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Phlox Fessenden
- Posts: 50
- Joined: Fri Feb 23, 2024 8:35 pm
- Age: 17
- Gender Identity: Male
- Race: Faunus (Vampire Bat ears and fangs)
- Aura Color: Indigo
- Occupation: First year student, Junior Librarian
- Semblance Name: Reverb
- Weapon Name: Reqium Avengement
Well, there is a few flaws here, but really nice character. Like the weapon and the back ground, so that will be a yes from me.
I'm not a pessimist; I'm a realist. And reality is often pessimistic
Talks in #8000BF
Talks in #8000BF
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Professor Fiona L Caligo
- Posts: 16
- Joined: Sat Feb 17, 2024 2:36 pm
- Age: 30
- Gender Identity: Female
- Race: Owl Faunus
- Aura Color: White
- Occupation: Professor of Security and Combat Medicine
- Semblance Name: Lux and Void
- Weapon Name: Circadian
With the added fixes, Carmine is adequate for role-play, has more than enough votes and is therefor approved for role-play on the site.
Have fun.
Have fun.
Fiona rambles in #BEB6A3