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Ela Motley Character Approvals

Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2022 11:06 pm
by Ela Motley
Yes, I am an adult.

I have an approved character on this called Al Ciendra.

If you want to have an RP example, please check out the various threads I have been a part of writing as Al, my writing style will not differ much from account to account.

Re: Ela Motley Character Approvals

Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2022 2:15 am
by Ela Motley
App is closed cuz this character profile got corrupted.

Re: Ela Motley Character Approvals

Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2022 9:16 pm
by Ela Motley
App is re-opened, gimme votes!

Please be merciful, this is a quick redo of what I wrote down before the profile got corrupted.

Re: Ela Motley Character Approvals

Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2022 9:47 pm
by Chain Dupp
Ahh, yes, the perfect person to call if anyone needs to have something BONKed.

I like the duo these sisters make, and I look forward to seeing how they'll interact both in tandem with and independent of each other.

'Yes'.

Re: Ela Motley Character Approvals

Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2022 10:29 pm
by Professor W B Copperfield
Well, Ela is finally arriving at Beacon with her sister. Good to see them here. I don't really see anything wrong with her profile after the stuff we talked about on Discord so... you're good to go!

Vote yes

Re: Ela Motley Character Approvals

Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2022 1:19 am
by Myron Hyles
... God that's tall. Anyway, I'm a fan of the backstory, and kinda curious to know what improved her and her sister's Semblances.
There are two or three typos here and there, but the only remarkable one:
As the name suggests, Ela's semblance allows her to eat dust, specifically and only Wind and Gravity dust, other dust types will simply not have an effect.
I think that was copy-pasted from Lin's profile.

That's a third Yes if you care for it ;-)

Re: Ela Motley Character Approvals

Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2022 2:35 am
by Roseman Winchester
I read through it and it looked really good, the weapon and semblance were really well made and balanced with the backstory giving quite a bit of depth to the character, even if there were a few confusing parts.

That's a yes vote from me!