Aurum Dasheng

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Aurum Dasheng
Posts: 1
Joined: Mon Mar 07, 2022 11:34 am
Age: 21
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Faunus: Monkey tail
Aura Color: Gold
Occupation: 4th Year Student
Semblance Name: Iron Nimbus
Weapon Name: Dasheng Legacy

Hello, Rouge/Aurum here!

I’ve finally taken the time to finish Aurum Dasheng, the monkey Faunus! Please give him a read and a consideration for approval.


1. Are you 18 or older?
Yep

2. Do you have past experience with collaborative writing or roleplay, and if so, roughly how much?
I’ve been doing this for many years and have a lot of experience!

A roleplay post of him specifically!

The courtyard of Beacon Academy buzzed with activity as students sparred, trained, and studied. Aurum Dasheng stood apart from the crowd, his massive frame casting a long shadow over the training grounds. His Dasheng Legacy staff rested horizontally across his shoulders, held casually by his outstretched arms. The weight of the weapon, so unwieldy for most, seemed negligible in his grip.

“Come on, Leon,” Aurum called, a smirk tugging at his lips. His amber eyes glinted with playful challenge as he watched his rival approach. “You’ve been bragging about that new technique all week. Show me it’s worth the hype.”

Leon rolled his eyes but readied his weapon, a curved blade shimmering faintly with embedded dust. “You’re going to regret asking for this,” he replied, his tone half-serious, half-amused. Around them, a small group of students paused their own training to watch. Aurum’s matches with Leon were practically school events—equal parts rivalry and spectacle.

As Leon lunged forward, Aurum sidestepped effortlessly, the red sash at his waist fluttering with the motion. With a fluid sweep of his staff, he blocked Leon’s follow-up strike, the metallic clang resonating across the field. “Not bad,” Aurum said, grinning. “But you’re going to need more than speed to break my guard.”

The match continued in a blur of movement, Aurum’s agility belying his size as he countered Leon’s attacks with precision. Each strike of his staff was calculated, using the weapon’s immense weight to create shockwaves that kept Leon on the defensive. Yet, despite the intensity of the sparring, there was no malice—only the shared drive to push each other further.

When the bout finally ended, with Aurum’s staff gently pressed against Leon’s chest, he offered a hand to his fallen rival. “You’re getting closer,” he said, his grin softening. “But not close enough.”

Leon groaned, accepting the help up. “One day, Aurum. One day.”

Aurum chuckled, the sound deep and genuine, as the crowd dispersed. For all his strength and discipline, moments like these reminded him why he had come to Beacon—not just to prove himself, but to grow alongside people who shared his passion for the fight.
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Ethan Sagol
Posts: 26
Joined: Fri Sep 23, 2022 6:42 am
Age: 20
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Lavender
Occupation: Student
Semblance Name: Moment to Moment
Weapon Name: Kotev Cherev

Love me a good Sun Wukong allusion.

Welcome aboard, Mr. Dasheng!
Ethan speaks in a68cd8.

You can find EPs for all my characters here.
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Professor Fiona L Caligo
Posts: 15
Joined: Sat Feb 17, 2024 2:36 pm
Age: 30
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Owl Faunus
Aura Color: White
Occupation: Professor of Security and Combat Medicine
Semblance Name: Lux and Void
Weapon Name: Circadian

Aurum looks like an incredibly well fleshed out character and fits the site extremely well, the warframe face claim is cool as hell but definitly should be linked in the semblance description rather then the main look for the profile, also, please my dyslexia can't handle how you wrote the (dis)like's, strengths and weakness sections, please leave some more space between letters.
Nitpicks aside, welcome to the site.
Fiona rambles in #BEB6A3
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